Michael Leone on Thu, 11 Jan 2001 10:57:21 -0500


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Re: [PLUG] job application


>
>  No entry found for "stradegies" in the dictionary.
>
>  Suggestions:
>
>  strategies

Also ....

> > * Worked with in Windows NT 4.0 and 2000 enviroment.

Worked with or worked in. Not both.

> > Computer Learning Center, Inc., Philadelphia, PA  January  2000
> > Network Engineering Program
> > * Proficiency in Microsoft Windows 95/NT and IIS 4.0
> > * Experience with Novell Network Operating System
> > * Training in network maintenance

You should keep the same tense at all times - "Proficient", "Experienced
with","Trained in".

Sorry; just a little constructive criticism.



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