[PLUG] my google code in project

[kbenjamin Coplon <mr.gaga@gmail.com>]

for google code in i am trying to make an ad for FreeBSD.
http://www.google-melange.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2011/7192358
my idea is to make an ad talking about how BSD was integral to the
founding of the Internet
so my questions are;
What do you think of my draft ? (attached)
corrections?
anything missing?
other thoughts?

also does any one know of a good way to make this into a presentable timeline?
i can't any appropriate software
(i plan to add pictures)

thanks

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